*Updated! Thanks, Panda! Corrected d, yeah! more complete now.....
让我告诉你
有一种爱叫做放手
为爱放弃天长地久
如果你總為別人撐傘
我何苦还為你等在雨中?
你总笑着说
她是朋友
但你眼中太温柔
我知道你想自由
而自由是你最爱的.
原来爱情这么痛苦
原来爱情是这样
你一次一次忽略我的感受.
不值得我爱
不值得想起
不值得我哭泣
这种回忆 不值得我提起
这段感情 早就该放弃.
我真的真的想放弃
我想我可以習慣一個人生活
我想我可以假裝不曾愛過
只想变的更坚强
强到能够遺忘.
*MuaHaHaHa...Proud nia... ^^
My First Try!
First attempt!
Anything wrong?
MeanIngFuL or MeanIngLess?
Not really that lousy rite?
My sIs-In-Law corrected some of my mistakes.....Thanks!
*P/S - To those who understand and can read in chinese pls comment la.....
Thanks oo....appreciate it!
20 October 2008
My 1st Try! *wInk wInk*
♥ K e L s at 10:13 PM
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2 comments:
我知到你想自由,
"知道"写错了。
嗯。。。i m the one who can read mandarin and like to comment~
is a good try,写得很好,期待你的第二篇。
oh yea... nice to meet you, my name is Panda. feel free to visit my blog always. 我写中文的。
MuaHaHaHa! Sorry about "知道" hahaha....chinese quite complicated la...actually i don und much 1, i am eng educated since kindy...hehe...but i like chinese as in mandarin poems and others. Thanks for your comment, appreciate it. Anyway, nice 2 meet u 2! Hav a nice day k.....
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